完型填空 (补全短文) "三遍法":第一遍了解大意;第二遍作题;第三遍检查确认 例题: Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel. "I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river." On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars." 答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before 7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end 3.短文写作 短文写作评分标准 评分标准: 第一档:(15分-13分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法无误,词汇拼写正确,卷面整洁。 第二档:(12分-10分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法有少量错误,少量拼写错误,卷面欠整洁。 第三档:(9分-6分)基本符合题目要求,漏掉若干关键词,超出了题目限制,整篇表达基本清楚,语言有部分错误。 第四档:(3分-5分) 只能写出题目要求的一两个要点;只有个别句子能看懂,语法、词汇错误很多。 第五档:(1分-2分)只写出了符合题意的若干单词。 写作要求: 符合题意;逻辑通畅;语法单词正确;卷面清洁。 写作的难题--写作的步骤 篇--段--句--词 1."篇" 明确主题 2."段" 构建结构 运用"提纲" 提纲案例 《我最喜爱的老师》 篇 主题: 段 提纲: 1. 老师基本信息介绍 a. 年龄 b. 相貌 c. 所授科目 d. … 2.令我感动的小故事 (描写与叙事相结合) a. 时间 b. 地点 c. 事情的经过 d. 关键词 shy; encourage 3.我对老师的评价 关键词:enjoy his class; like 3. "句" 填充内容 多用短句(简单句),慎用长句(并列句/复合句/并列复合句) 文中参杂若干语法正确的长句能够成为亮点并得到加分。 短句为主,辅之于长句。 句子的完整、时态、人称、单复数、以及动词的变形。 修辞 比喻 像… be like The house is like a tank. He is like a panda. as… as… I am as hungry as a wolf. The teacher is as busy as a bee. He is as strong as a horse. 夸张 I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher. 拟人 The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine. 4."词" 可分为 "一般词汇" 和 "具体词汇" 一般词汇 He is a good man. good → 具体词汇 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless. "一般描写" 和 "具体描写" 一般描写 She is very beautiful. → 具体描写 She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.