When I was a kid, the river is very clear and beautiful so I always go swimming and fishing. Recently, I discover that there are more and more garbage in here. Garbage doesn’t reduce even though some people willing to throw that into the trash. It is not onlyaffectshumanhealthbut also destroys some beautiful environment. My teacher told me that if people still not protect the environment, we would be in trouble. For example, you eat a gum, but you throw in the road. Some of animals would die it due to the gum. If some of animals die, it would bring some infectious disease to human. Nevertheless, there are still more and more bottles in beach as result of human. Some people don’t know how to respect the environment, it may cause water is poisonous. Nowadays, researchers would discover that human would get cancer owing to water. What’s worse, some of factories still break the law to destroy the river in order to money. They don’t know that how the water is important to people because we use it everywhere, we should more treasure it. Therefore, we need to try our best to protect the environment because there is only a earth in the world. We have to remember where the happiness comes from and also learn how to respect anything where we live forever.
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When I was a kid, the river was very clear and beautiful, so I always went swimming and fishing. Recently, I discover that there is more and more garbage around the river. Garbage doesn’t reduce even though some people are not willing to throw that into the trash. It not onlyaffectshumanhealthbut also destroys our beautiful environment. My teacher told me that if people still did not protect the environment, we would be in trouble. For example, you eat a gum, but you throw it on the road. Some animals will die because of the gum. If some animals die, it will cause some infectious disease. Nevertheless, there are still more and more bottles on the beach. Some people don’t know how to protect the environment, it may make water become poisonous. Nowadays, researchers has discovered that human will get cancer owing to the water. What’s worse, some factories still break the law to pollute the river in order to get more money. They don’t know how important the water is.We use it everywhere, and we should treasure it. Therefore, we need to try our best to protect the environment because there is only one earth in the world. We have to remember where the happiness comes from and also learn how to protect everything where we live forever.
修改老师：Crystal 老师三年级:黃欣欣