I was one day reading the newspaper when I saw a little kid falling down from the sky; I was the only one who can save him in time for I was on the first floor. I rushed out of the building, and ran outside. I knew that this was very, very extremely dangerous, but if the child falls down he will probably die of pain. He brought a big blanket, and then a pillow, he calculated the area was a 100 percent sure that the child would not die. The child came falling, and falling; Poof!! He landed on the pillow. I was curious and glad that the child still had his life, and got a reward of fifty pounds of gold and one bag of silver. I was very happy. But when it was night time, I heard an I’m coming, noise. I woke up, and saw a big light, then appeared a little flying cat! That was very, very strange. I rubbed my eyes, and pinched everywhere to make sure that it wasn’t a dream. But it was true. The cat said, Hello, I am Plad, and I am a hero; with me you can transform and save the day every time. I was astonished and said, Excuse me, but why did you choose me? the flying cat replied. Because that you saved a falling kid, and that was a challenge to defeat. You are now my rightful owner. I put on a ring that the flying cat gave me, and went back to sleep. In the morning, I decided to test out my transforming, Plad, claw set! and then a strange thing happened, I transformed into Cat nor! I tried my powers, and then I saw a sort of bug that I recognize, Ladybug! I was going to find her when I found out that my ring was flashing, I said, Claws off! then I transformed back. I was very excited to enjoy my first lesson of being cat nor. I was quite astonished, and happy At night, I thought I heard another noise, Not again! suddenly a round of ball came to me again and said, Don’t worry, I am Teeky, and you cat noris going to work with ladybug to defeat villains. I was astonished again, and then Teeky vanished from sight, I decided to follow her, but I thought maybe next time, for I didn’t want to bother the kid or girl or other people from sleeping. And so I have got a job from Plad to save the world. 修改后： I was one day reading the newspaper when I saw a little kid falling down from the sky. I was the only one who could save him in time for I was on the first floor. I rushed out of the building, and ran outside. I knew that this was extremely dangerous, but if the childfell down hewould probably die of pain.I brought a big blanket, and then a pillow. After calculating theheight, Iwas 100 percent sure that the child would not die. The childkept falling, and falling; Poof!! He landed on the pillow. I was curious and glad that the child still had his life, and I got a reward of fifty pounds of gold and one bag of silver. I was very happy. But when it was night time, I heard an I’m coming, noise. I woke up, and saw a bigbeam oflight, then appeared a little flying cat! That was very, very strange. I rubbed my eyes, and pinched everywhere to make sure that it wasn’t a dream. But it was true. The cat said, Hello, I am Plad, and I am a hero; with me you can transform and save the day every time. I was astonished and said, Excuse me, but why did you choose me? The flying cat replied, Because you saved a falling kid, and that was a challenge to defeat. You are now my rightful owner. I put on a ring that the flying cat gave me, and went back to sleep. In the morning, I decided to test out my transforming, Plad, claw set! and then a strange thing happened, I transformed into Cat nor! I tried my powers, and then I saw a sort of bug that I recognize, Ladybug! I was going to find her when I found out that my ring was flashing, I said, Claws off! then I transformed back. I was very excited to enjoy my first lesson of being cat nor. I was quite astonished, and happy. At night, I heard another noise, Not again! Suddenly a round ball came to me again and said, Don’t worry, I am Teeky, and you cat noris going to work with ladybug to defeat villains. I was astonished again, and then Teeky vanished from sight. I decided to follow her, but I thought maybe next time, for I didn’t want to bother the kid or girl or other people from sleeping. And so I have got a job from Plad to save the world. 四年级:欧阳雨鹭