May day is coming. I'm going to Shanghai with my mother and my father. We're going by plane. We're going tostay in a hotel. We're going to go sightseeing. We're going have fun!
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May day is coming. I'm going to Shanghai with my mother and father. We're going by plane. We're going to stay in a hotel. We're going to go sightseeing. We're going to have fun!修改教师:Crystal老师五年级:许莉安